Hello Johnathan I am a Stundent who attends Panmure Bridge School.I think you have done an amazing Job.I really like you story.What did you learn?I think you should work on making a blurb so people can understand what you have done and how you done it and also maybe you can get a teacher to cheack you spelling.You story Sound really interesting my favorite part of you story was the alien.What was the Blue and Yellow Suppose to mean? Well done Johnathan
Hi Sanujan I'm from Paparoa Range school thank you for liking my story the blue and yellow didn't mean anything we just had to highlight our best bits of the story.Thank you for telling me to check my spelling with the teacher.
Hello Angela the school that I go to is Paparoa Range school Thanks for reading my story.Thanks for the Idea about the blurb.The blue and yellow didn't mean anything we just had to highlight our best bits of the story.
Hi, Johnathan. My name is Sanujan, and I am from Panmure Bridge School. I found you presentation really interesting. I like the fact that you've hooked in the reader with a rhyming sentence at the beginning. Next time try you best to make some changes the colour combination, because dark blue and black don't do together. I think you can that if you're making your background dark blue, you should make your font colours white or other lighter colours. Also try your best to find a font style that best suits you because I personally am not a big fan of Ariel. Have a look at the sentences that you've not highlighted and let me know if you find anything, that you've probably missed. I have a quick question. Was it hard to create this presentation and add in the features or was it easy. Anyway this is an amazing blog post. Keep up the extraordinary blogging.
Hello Johnathan
ReplyDeleteI am a Stundent who attends Panmure Bridge School.I think you have done an amazing Job.I really like you story.What did you learn?I think you should work on making a blurb so people can understand what you have done and how you done it and also maybe you can get a teacher to cheack you spelling.You story Sound really interesting my favorite part of you story was the alien.What was the Blue and Yellow Suppose to mean?
Well done Johnathan
Hi Sanujan I'm from Paparoa Range school thank you for liking my story the blue and yellow didn't mean anything we just had to highlight our best bits of the story.Thank you for telling me to check my spelling with the teacher.
DeleteHello Angela the school that I go to is Paparoa Range school Thanks for reading my story.Thanks for the Idea about the blurb.The blue and yellow didn't mean anything we just had to highlight our best bits of the story.
DeleteHi, Johnathan.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sanujan, and I am from Panmure Bridge School. I found you presentation really interesting. I like the fact that you've hooked in the reader with a rhyming sentence at the beginning. Next time try you best to make some changes the colour combination, because dark blue and black don't do together. I think you can that if you're making your background dark blue, you should make your font colours white or other lighter colours. Also try your best to find a font style that best suits you because I personally am not a big fan of Ariel. Have a look at the sentences that you've not highlighted and let me know if you find anything, that you've probably missed. I have a quick question. Was it hard to create this presentation and add in the features or was it easy.
Anyway this is an amazing blog post.
Keep up the extraordinary blogging.
Hi Sanujan Thanks for the tips about my story. My presentation was kind of challenging but it was fun.Thanks for looking at my blog post.
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