Friday 8 June 2018

Foods on Mars (Johnathan and Elliot)

WALA: finding reliable information from more than 2 sources and learning about how people use food in different places.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Johnathan,
    What an informative piece of work. My thoughts of humans living in mars were very low. Well, that was before reading your presentation. What amazed me is, food can be created in Mars. Ok, tell me. How long did it take you to find all of these extraordinary facts/information about foods on Mars? Also he is another tip, next time try your best to attribute images. This is because we need to give credit to the actually person who took or made these pictures. However was as astonishing presentation. Keep It Up

    Yours Sincerely
    Sanujan

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  2. Thank you for that encouraging and helpful talk I will take your advice and use it for my next work.

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  3. Hi Johnathan,
    I really like how you have layed out your DLO. Would you like to visit mars.I think you could work on the background on slide nine because the words were hard to see. Keep up the good work.

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